我的总结！献给8.9的考生！！（网上范文总结）
这些作文都是我在网上看到得就分类了，大多是赖劲松写得，在这里先谢过了，替大家谢谢老师了，我看了他写得很不错得，很多短语都很经典得，大家一定是参考了，不要背诵了，作文8.9就省111，109了，还有108是北京下午考过一次得，我认为这个是重点了，但是已经两次都是新题了，还有4次考试，重复得机会也是有得，考过两次我觉得就不用怎么准备，不放心就看看论点了，其他得考过一次得就有考得可能了，总之，我觉得应该这么准备了
一级：111，109，121,108
二级：118，113，114，105
三级：122
个人观点了，呵呵！考试嘛，碰到了当然结大欢喜，碰不到也没办法了！最保险得方法就是全看了！！预测永远有不准确得时间嘛！！！！！

v104
范文一：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of wild animals been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, the habitat of wild animals is being destroyed, but many people think that it to be insignificant to protect these wild animals. The above point is absolutely wrong, this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. Not only people but also wild animals have the right to live. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn’t be divided with that natural environment was destroyed. It is unfair to wild animals whose existent rights are being ignored.

Another reason is that biologic diversity should be protected. In the future, it will be terrible and alone definitely if only people survive on this globe. Also, the variety of species has an important scientific value. For instance, invention of radar was based on ultrasonic of bat.

Last but not the least reason is many wild animals are not protected, it means the natural balance will be broken, people will face challenges and problems. People destroyed environment of nature, resulting a smaller in habitat for wild animals. Also, the problems of environment have already affected oneself of people. If people couldn’t amend current status, it will be the biggest bale of them.

In conclusion, people ought to pay out plenty of money for improving existent environment of wild animals. This behavior doesn’t have the meaning of alms. On the contrary, it just means atonement.
范文二：
Biological diversity has never been so threatened as it is today as a result of the process of human civilization. The various forms of pressure created by human activity have destroyed natural balance, led to the deterioration of natural habitats, genetic erosion and the rarity, even disappearance, of a number of plant and animal species.

As the pace of civilization accelerates, more people, taking more space, needing to use more natural resources, engaging in ever-growing consumption, impose severe deterioration on the habitat of animals. An increasing number of people come to realize that the disappearance of animals will result in serious threat to the equilibrium of ecosystem. Simply put, the extinction of hawks, a rat-eating bird seen in many regions, will result in the rapid propagation of rats. And rats, further, will destroy the prairies and threaten the other animals like gazelles, zebras and others, who live on grass and green lands. The coexistence of animals and human beings creates perfect harmony and brings about the vividness to our planet.

It is hard to imagine what our world would be like without animals. Sociologists also point out that the disappearance of animals can cause social and economic problems. Animal trade, as a supporting sector to the world economy, was very active before. However, the situation is beyond control since animal trade is very profitable and alluring. Many species cannot escape the adversity of being killed.

Certainly, our diet cannot be without meat. There are living stocks, which can provide us with sufficient and nutritious produce. Therefore, we need not to resort to wild animals, especially the endangered ones. To protect animals is to protect our living environment. Every individual should join efforts to keep the diversity of animals. (288 words)
范文三：
With the development of society, there are more and more problems brought to our attention, one of which is that wild animals have no place to survive in the 21st century. Some people think that the protection is a waste of resource. From my point of view, I disagree with this statement for some reasons below.

Firstly, the animals and human beings are creatures created by God. Although as Darwin said, “ Survival is the fittest.” we are human beings who have thought. We can’t behave like barbarians and destroy the environment where animals live. We need places to survive and so do animals. Therefore, we ought to give them a wonderful and natural place to survive.

Secondly, there are a lot of species of animals on the earth. They are just like our neighbor. For example, in my childhood, I went to my grandparents’ home in the countryside every weekend. Not far away from the house, there is a forest. Sometimes, I go there with my cousins and brothers. We met a lot of little wild animals there such as, monkeys, snakes, rabbits and so on.

However, there are a lot of people who may agree and have their own opinion concerning this case. From my angle, we, human beings, can’t deprive the survival rights of animals. On the contrary, we have to protect them from extinction. Just imagine how horrible the world would be if human is the only creature in the world. Hence, the government should educate people to preserve and protect our neighbor, natural wild animals.

v105
范文：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of animals been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays more and more meat was provided for people, therefore many people think that animals are being killed just for food, and this kind of action is cruel for animals. The above point is absolutely true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. Not only people but also animals have the right to live. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn’t be divided with that animals were hunted and killed cruelly. It is unfair to animals whose existent right was only exchanged with people’s food.

Another reason is that if people do not eat meat, their health will not be affected. The tenet of Chinese Buddhism forbids monks to kill any animals and eat them. Moreover the Chinese Kongfu comes from the Chinese temple that is famous in the world. The Chinese monks’ healthy physique proves that cookbooks do not need have meat.

Last but not the least reason is that people have already made all kinds of man-made meat, so they do not have to eat animal meat. Man-made meat contains enough nutrition for healthy people, but it taste isn’t better than animal’s meat. At least, we do not have to kill animals in order to satisfy our appetite.

In conclusion, the important thing is to stop killing animals before it’s too late. Otherwise we will lose them.
 

v106
idea:
同意会比较好写,
1.通过数据来验证,这是很强有力的(数据可以自己编)
2.从医学角度,吸烟有害健康
3.吸烟可以传播很多都是被动吸烟者,谈谈被动吸烟的坏处
范文：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of tobacco been so much deb

原因:城市方面,外资投入集中于城市高薪技术发展;农村方面,一贯推崇旧道路的乡村经济,导致经济的停滞!
解决办法:
1.控制城市人口
2.交通网络扩张
3.政府鼓励农企
范文一：
The living standard gap between city and countryside is bigger and bigger. In my country, dozens of rural young people have been absorbed high salary and comfortable living in the big city. So more and more young people select to work in the city and abandon farming for a better future. In this essay we will examine the problem of the increasing living standard gap between city and countryside and the solutions, such as improving educational level and economy in the country.

The main reason is the different standard of education between the city and the countryside. Because of poverty, dozens of country students lose the chance to study at school. So country people’s educational level is too low to find jobs of high salary. Commonly high salary requires high educational level. Manual labor means low salary: therefore, the country people will be poorer. It will become a bad circle.

Another reason is that economic development is not balanced between city and countryside. Such as both Traffic and transport are not convenient, information to be received slowly and industrial institution is too simple, all of them are the direct and primary reasons to induce this kind of problem that the growth of countryside’s economy less than city’s.

As result of the gap in living standard between the city and the countryside, the outlook is somewhat grim. People already realize this problem exists and are trying to solve it.

For one solution, developed cities should spend plenty of money on building country schools and helping poor country family that they have the ability to support their children to go to school.

The second solution is uniting city and based on country conditions of nature to progress local economy specially. In most of the countryside, plenty of natural resources aren’t utilized and developed. On the contrary, developing cities need lots of resources. They can help each other.

The important thing is that developed cities should provide help to change the country, in order to reduce the living standard gap between the city and the countryside.

范文二：
As the step of economic development accelerates, the gap between the city and the countryside becomes more and more overt, which arouses colossal concerns. Take a further look at the phenomenon, there are three major causes.
 
Firstly, the insufficiency of investment in the rural areas accounts mainly for the issue. China, for example, covers a very large area. Due to the emphasis on the development in the coastal areas, the government devotes more investment in the large cities, such as Shanghai, Beijing and Guangzhou. The investment, undoubtedly, is repaid by the threefold increase of economy and commerce in these cities. However, this is not the case in the rural areas and the western regions. The lack of investment barriers the productivity and economic development and sharpens the gap between the city and the countryside.

Secondly, the low education level in the rural areas contributes partly to the gap of living. Education is the prime force of productivity. Keeping this in mind, many countries and governments give priority to the development of education. China’s education witnessed a rapid growth in the past decade. However, the education level in the countryside still keeps very low. The enrollment of primary schools and secondary schools is much lower compared with the advanced regions, not to mention the developed countries in the world. Without good education, the development of economy and technology would be a dream difficult to be realized.

Finally, the influx of migrant workers to the cities from the countryside deteriorates the undeveloped condition in the rural areas. The life style in the urban areas is very attractive to the people in the countryside. To seek more working opportunities, many people abandon the fertile lands and leave them uncultivated. If the situation continues, it will lead to serious unbalance of economic and regional development.

To sum up, only when the government renders more concerns over the issue, can the gap between the cities and the countryside be bridged. (325 words)

范文三：
Introduction :(48 words) When you look back to the last century, amazingly you will find that not only all world's largest
populated cities had experienced different population growth rates, but also the difference between
the city and the countryside had grown accordingly. Two reasons of mine can examine this tendency as following.

Topic sentence 1: The glamorous city life allures lots of human resources to
move to/agglomerate in the city, taking major contribution to the gap. (20 words) Supporting sentences: In the city, there are many advantages to attract those talented people to settle down--more
job opportunities, cultural activities, sporting events, you name them. Therefore, even those
well-educated people who are originated from the country intend to lead a dynamic city life
instead of returning to face the static country view. If the rural government can work out some
favorable policies such as low prices of land occupied for industrial uses, with the combination
of low cost of workforce, investors are willing to establish factories in the countryside. The
improvement of employment situation will enormously help pull back some intellectuals
and lessen the gap. (104 words)

Topic sentence 2: In the second part, I would mention the factor of transportation. (11 words) Supporting sentences: The vital resistance of economic development in the countryside is the inconvenient transportation. It has been witnessed in China that almost all leading cities are scattered along
the coastline. They take advantages of sea, air and other sophisticated transport facilities to
enjoy high economic growth rates. I suggest that the central government should fund on
infrastructure for the whole nation, including rural areas, to build up a nationwide transport
network. Consequently tourism as well as housing in the countryside will be boosted, and the
difference between the city and the country would be minimized. (94 words)

conclusion (48 words)
To sum up, intelligent resources would determine who is the winner or loser of the intense
competition; moreover, transit systems also play an important role in developing economy. If
both issues were tackled properly in the countryside, gap between the city and the country
would never be overwhelming.

V109
idea:
1,所有电脑教学资料都是来自老师多年来教学经验所积累的精华,电脑只是教学经验的总结,不能替代老师在教学中所发挥的作用
2,每个人在理解能力上有差异,电脑无法解决学生在学习新知识过程中所遇到的不同问题
而老师可以通过多方面多角度的讲解来引导学生正确理解和掌握新知识
3,削弱教师在教学中的重要性势必会影响就业率,给社会增加负担,减少就业机会
4,教学过程是一种启发的过程,而不是一味的灌输,尤其是在基础教育阶段
5,电脑教育只能作为一种辅助手段和工具,而不能代替老师在教学过程中所发挥的重要作用

v111
idea:
小孩子的个性是后天培养还是先天生成的(给出观点分析原因型)
后天培养
1.医学角度
2.论述环境的作用
3.父母行为的影响
范文:
Nowhere in the world has the issue of children’s education been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, many parents let their children attend all kinds of courses that will help children to get a better future; therefore, some people think that the postnatal nurture is more important than the congenital factors for personal growth and progress. The above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that success of a child would not be separated from right teaching and personal effort. Currently, lots of famous scientists and politicians gain huge success in the world, as they are long-term to hard work. Moreover, the main reason why plenty of developing countries drop behind is their poor education.

Another reason is that if people do not work hard but only depend on their high intellect, they will be far from successful. For instance, the little Bronte was quite clever during his childhood; he was particularly adept at writing. But he was so satisfied with his superior intellect that he did not study carefully. Finally, he became an idle person. However, his sisters became famous authors as a result of their hard study. They are Charlotte Bronte and Emily Bronte. Charlotte wrote “Jane Eyre “, “Wuthering Heights” was written by Emily.

Last but not the least reason is the advantages of natural factors that are more and more similar. Plenty of advanced technological products are invented and widely used. They can supply people’s gaps. In the past, the difference of mathematical ability was remarkable. With the invention of the calculator, people can hardly find out the difference.

In conclusion, scientific and proper teaching is the most significant factor for personal growth and development. If people are satisfied with their advantages, they will become the biggest failures.

写作思路(推荐)
后天理由
Difference between children’s education

IN certain respects, children are the same all over the world. But many factors affect the development of children, both parental support and education being major influences. There are vast differences between schooling styles, and parental attitudes towards children, in China and the West.

Some of these differences have obvious causes, for example, the "Little Emperor" syndrome in China. Parents everywhere have dreams for their offspring. However, the concentration of energy invested into planning for a child’s future is noticeable in China, as it is not diluted by the presence of siblings.

This adoration can be seen in other ways. One of the most common is spoiling children, giving them everything they want. Some of the time this is a reward for good work, although there are children who receive all they want merely because they demand it from their parents.

Hard work?

Parents also have this tendency to spoil children in the West. If a child does start to see itself as the all-deserving star of the Universe, usually its siblings will tease and bully the child until it stops feeling self-important.

Another contrast between the upbringing of children in China and the West is in schooling. Without a doubt, Chinese children work harder than their European and American counterparts. Their industriousness is admirable, and in comparison, Western students are lazy. In European countries, teenagers will often have a Saturday job, or holiday job, to supplement their allowance. This is rare in China, where education is considered of paramount importance, and time working detracts from study. The same contrast is true of romantic relationships between teenagers. I spoke to Han Li, a 16-year old student in Huhhot, about boyfriends. She said: "I have no time for a boyfriend, even if I did want one. I must study hard, there is a lot of pressure on me to get good grades and go to university."

The style of teaching is very different in China from in the West. The notion of "repeating after a teacher’’ seems old-fashioned and redundant in America and Europe. Large class sizes may be the reason for the popularity of this teaching method. In England, any class over 30 is considered large enough to impair learning. However, I have noticed that this parrot-style of learning is being replaced with more progressive methods of education in many Chinese schools.

The perfect solution would be to combine Western and Chinese education methods. Combat the laziness and apathy of Western students; encourage initiative within Chinese students, by expecting independent thought as opposed to mindless repetition. As for spoilt kids anywhere, some of these children would benefit from a smack on the bum.

Genevieve Roberts graduated from Leeds University, England. She has spent the last eight months teaching in China. Anyone with unusual cultural or social experiences who wants to share them with us here at 21st Century can send a copy to elt@21stcentury.com.cn.

By Genevieve Roberts, SPECIAL TO 21ST CENTURY
 

V 112
idea:
1,随着人口断增长,社会就业压力越来越大,鼓励高阶人员退休是缓解社会压力的一种好方法.也有利于社会稳定
2,年轻人有朝气和动力,对工作有相当大的热情,头脑灵活,并且掌握了相对领先的新技术,有利公司长远发展
3,高阶人员退休后可以得到一笔相对丰厚的退休金,幸福的安度晚年
4,但是年轻人没有工作经验,无法在短时间内进入状态,创造价值,工作效率低,这样就需要有工作经验的人来带新人逐步走上正轨
范文：
Companies should encourage old employees (55 years old) to retire, in order to give opportunities to the new generation. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, plenty of old employees who are more than 55 years old must retire because of company policy; therefore, many people think that the development of a company cannot be separated from the number of young employees. The above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that plenty of young employees mean that the company is infused with lots of young blood. With the development of technology, more and more new technological products have been developed. The new generation masters advanced technology and has the energy to exploit. They have learned lots of knowledge in university; therefore it is definitely useful for the development of companies.

Another reason is that old employees cannot adapt themselves to the rapid pace. Old employees find it difficult to rapidly learn new things. With their limited physical strength, they are not capable of heavy manual work. So old employees are not a patch on young employees, it means not only intellect but also physical strength.

Last but not the least reason is old employees have already worked for more than half their lifetime, so they should retire to enjoy life. The old employees have already paid out too much in order to look after their family and career. So they should pursue their

Nowhere in the world has the issue of animals been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays more and more meat was provided for people, therefore many people think that animals are being killed just for food, and this kind of action is cruel for animals. The above point is absolutely true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that people should not master existent right of animals. Not only people but also animals have the right to live. More and more wild animals are rapidly disappearing from this globe, it couldn’t be divided with that animals were hunted and killed cruelly. It is unfair to animals whose existent right was only exchanged with people’s food.

Another reason is that if people do not eat meat, their health will not be affected. The tenet of Chinese Buddhism forbids monks to kill any animals and eat them. Moreover the Chinese Kongfu comes from the Chinese temple that is famous in the world. The Chinese monks’ healthy physique proves that cookbooks do not need have meat.

Last but not the least reason is that people have already made all kinds of man-made meat, so they do not have to eat animal meat. Man-made meat contains enough nutrition for healthy people, but it taste isn’t better than animal’s meat. At least, we do not have to kill animals in order to satisfy our appetite.

In conclusion, the important thing is to stop killing animals before it’s too late. Otherwise we will lose them.
写作范文：动物保护v104,v115

v116
task2 谈论一下媒体中 对青少年有不良影响的内容 你认为政府应该采取什么样的政策

v117
idea:
children要會competite:
1.现在是竞争社会.....2.竞争是生存的方法....3.塑造顽强性格,可以直面困难和人生
co-operate:
1.社会是个大家庭.....2.举例比赛需要协作精神....3.互补
最后show你的观点倾向

范文：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, the competition is more and more furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach competition to children that it will be bad for their growth, let them learn how to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that children’ intellect is not enough capable to analyze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching, the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.

Another reason is that if children work together, they could easily find out and supply their gaps. Because of limit of age, in order to children’s knowledge is limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together, they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mistakes.

Last but not the least reason is the cooperation means common progress. A people’s ability is limited, but group’s power is unlimited. Lots of things are really difficult to complete by personal power. Nevertheless, people work together to solve problems that will become really easy and simple. Thus, it is important to let children get to know signification of cooperation.

In conclusion, children ought to learn signification of cooperation and how to work together, in order to their better future.

v118
范文：
Nowadays, dozens of money was devoted to build all kinds of places of entertainment by our government, such as cinema and stadium. However plenty of people considered that lots of money should be devoted to more significant places, such as iatric ensure and education. The above point is certainly true, this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that people’s concept of entertainment have already changed hugely, traditional concourse of entertainment couldn’t be adapted people’s new require of entertainment. In this paying attention to times of personality, more and more items of entertainment could be selected, such as disco and amusement park. If government also spend plenty of money on building theater and stadium that they will be insignificant definitely.

Another reason is that lots of money should be spent on iatrical ensure and iatrical research by government. In this society, lots of handicapped and patients were suffering from ill; they need our kind help and care. Government should spend more money on this weak group to save their life. As well as they also have the right to enjoy a good health.

Last but not the least reason is that government should devote plenty of money to education. Lots of children lost chance of study at school, because of familial poor. The Asia had the largest number (37,000,000) of the students who unable to go to school. The children mean the future of the world, therefore children's education problems should be widely paid attention to by government.

In conclusion, government should spend more money on iatrical ensure and education, in order to the weak groups, such as handicapped and students who unable to go to school.

 不同意
男生和女生思维特点不同
选科上的差异
举例说明有些难可做女不能做
同意
男女平等，无论男生还是女生都应该享有平等的选择专业的机会。
男女搭配做事不累(这是开玩笑的话,哈哈)就是效率高
范文：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of female rights and interests been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, plenty of universities limit the number of female students who study in some of subjects; therefore, many people think universities should accept equal numbers of men and female study in every subject, but others have a negative attitude. As far as I am concerned, I think men and women should gain equal educational opportunities, but accepting equal numbers of male and female, in every subject, is unnecessary and impossible. Therefore, I disagree with the view that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. My argument in support of my view is as follows.

The main reason is that mode of thinking is different between female and male. Everyone, male and female, has equal right to study in universities, nevertheless, due to difference of in thought and views. Men and Women may represent varied study capability. A case in point is that men may possess more talent than women in mathematics, physics and like stuff. In the study of language, on the other hand, female shows stronger ability than male. In the history of human beings, most scientists, especially those who research abstract theories, are male.

Another reason is that nature decides different directions of development between men and women. Today, although female’s right is being increased, female still plays a different social role. Women are by nature good at housekeeping since the biological function of a woman is first to bring children into the world and then to bring them up and it has been proved by some scientists that women are not good at business management, political administration, etc. So, in the study of business and management, requiring equal numbers of male and female is not essential.

From what has been discussed above, we may draw the conclusion that accepting equal numbers of male and female students in every subject is impossible and I also disagree with this point of view.

Version 120
范文一：
Museums illuminate the culture, history and arts of the world. Every country and government spare no effort or money to enrich the collection of museums to cater for different tastes or needs of people, for the benefit of the present and future generations. There are bounteous museums all over the world.

The British Museum, which is maybe the largest one in the world, provides visitors with all-round knowledge about the world culture and arts. The visitors to the museum are all overwhelmed by the magnificence of the culture and history of mankind. If one wants to know about the development of human science and industry, he can have a tour to The Museum of Science and Industry located in Chicago, the United States, where a detailed scientific progress is presented vividly. You cannot miss every achievement human beings have made in history and you are sure to be shocked by the civilization our forefathers created. If one wants to have a browse of the important events in the past, American Museum of Photography is the best choice. It abounds in precious historical pictures and gives visitors unforgettable memory. Apart from the state-owned museums, there are also innumerable private museums whose purpose is to exhibit their cherished collection and popularize knowledge.

With a view to giving people updated information and rendering them a more detailed overview, many countries invest a great deal of money in the foundation of museums, because museums disseminate human knowledge and culture, which are more significant for the development of the young generation. Besides, entrepreneurs and individuals should also lay a fund for the improvement and rebuild of museums. The prosperity of human culture is not only the responsibility of the government, but also the responsibility of every individual and organization. (295 words)

范文二：
Nowhere in the world has the issue of museum’s progress been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays, more and more museums have to face the serious economic problem. Therefore, many people doubt museum’s existent signification. In this essay we will discuss the existent signification of museum and the solutions, such as buying by government and supporting by society

Firstly, museum is considered the historical symbol that it exhibits traditional culture of a nation. Nations of difference have different culture and history. The museum is the best way to let the younger generation savvy their ancestor’s history and let visitors and foreigners know varied culture and tradition.

Secondly, museum could save plenty of cultural relics that they are not destroyed and lost. The equipments of museum could perfectly save all kinds of displays.
As a result of the future of museum, the outlook is somewhat grim. People already realize this problem exists and are trying to solve it.

For one solution, the government ought to buy all museums. If museum belong to government, it will means main economic problem of museum is solved.
The second solution is that society ought to donate lots of money to maintain development of museum. The museum protects our history and culture, so we have obligation to support progress of museum.

The important thing is to protect current museums before it’s too late. Otherwise we will lose them.
 

v121
idea:
1.visitor imitate 后有什么坏处
2.如果来本国的visitor needn't imitate的话有什么好处
3.to accepting difference doesn't mean .....
4.To you mind,you agree with  the former or the latter view.
范文：
 Some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Some people disagree. They think the host country should welcome cultural difference. What do you think?

Nowhere in the world has the issue of culture shock been so much debated like in our society. Nowadays culture shock stands out particularly between tourists and host countries, therefore dozens of people considered visitors should try to adapt local traditional culture and habit of living. The above point is certainly true, this essay will outline three reasons.

The main reason is that respecting the custom and behavior of the host country can help tourists understand its culture. For instance, in Islamic countries, their belief is that the people can’t eat pork; they think that pig is not a symbol of spotlessness and pig will sully their holy belief. Therefore, when the visitors come to the Islamic countries, they should accept the custom, and then they will be greeted by indigene. There is no better example than this to demonstrate the strength of this point.

Another reason is that it is the best way to express tourists’ respect. Everyone state owns her behaviors and custom; history saw the development of this country. For example, when tourists go to visit host country, perhaps some of things are so out of fashion. However visitors also admire local culture and custom, it will be

The computer are widely used in education and some people think teacher are not play important role in the classroom .
to what extend do you agree? (agree/disagree)

nowadays,  the computer is rapidly growing in its popularity in education for its marvelous functions. however, the problem has become one of whether teachers or computers enjoy a vital role in education, which has aroused wide concern in public. yet i am, and probably always will be amazed when i hear people saying that teachers are no longer important in education with the advent of computers. deep down, i guess this might be a plausible hypothesis were it not for the following points.

on a substantive level, it is often the case that teachers can benefit students in many ways that computers cannot. indeed teachers often bring students a host of knowledge and ideas out of text books, such as ethics, issues in human behavior and such kind of things. even if there were no hard evidence to support the point that teachers are usually serving as the guide for students, a role which can never be performed by computers, there are plenty of vivid examples that support it. when i was studying in the high school, one of my teachers helped me with my study and taught me how to deal with difficulties in my life as well. so these benefits are impossible to be gained from computers.

in addition, a more subtle point can be made is that young students are more susceptible to the adverse influence of computers. it is a general principle that juveniles usually lack in the sense of judgment to tell right from wrong. so they may be more likely to be distracted from study by the lure that comes along with computers. therefore, teachers are superior to computers in cultivating students.

although it is all very well to suggest that teachers invariably enjoy the most critical role in fostering young people, let us not lose sight of the dramatic merits brought on by computers. and computers do open  the frontiers of the development of education.

nevertheless, i am still inclined to take sides with the opinion that teachers can never give way to computers. as is so often pointed out, the significant thing is to make computers facilitate teachers’ job.

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Version 122  Some people claim that using tobacco has brought severe social problems and smoking should be banned. To what extent do you agree with the
above statement?    

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Introduction (56 words)
Since the discovery of tobacco related to a number of health problems, an increasing number of people have called for prohibiting smoking. It is undeniable that still a considerable amount of smokers exist in this world. I would like to examine the advantages and disadvantages of smoking cigarettes as following and then offer my own opinion.
 
Body1(95words)
There are some advantages to taking tobacco.(topic sentence) First, tobacco industry contributes a great proportion of revenue to the nation. Extremely high taxation imposed on tobacco yielding and cigarette manufacturing has released the financial burden for both the government and the individual taxpayer generation by generation. Second, the soothing effects of smoking has been confirmed by ordinary smokers; particularly those who have hard-brain-working jobs are in favor of it; they claim that smoking cigarettes can make them calm and stimulate brain cells to work more efficiently. Finally, cigarettes play an important role in social activities. 

Body2 (106words)
On the other hand, smoking demonstrates numerous negative effects.(topic sentence) Initially, nicotine may bring takers a number of diseases. Second-hand smoking also does harm to your health. Moreover, hatred from non-smokers always grow against smokers hence some conflicts arise frequently. We then look at the statistics showing that thousands of fire accidents worldwide occur each year due to the litter of non-extinguished cigarette ends, not to mention the related deaths and losses. Last but not least, expenses have to be taken into consideration. Fine cigarettes are not cheap. If you get addicted to them, your daily amount of cigarette consumption will increase inevitably, emptying your pocket money.

Conclusion(88words)
After all, so far no direct evidence has been provided that smoking can definitely result in takers' death of lung cancer, and those fire accidents are the result of carelessness or irresponsibility of the smokers, not tobacco to be laid blames. Also, spending pocket money can never be considered as a financial burden. In addition, I suggest more restricted smoking areas be planned so as not to violate non-smokers' rights. After weighing the pros and cons of using tobacco, I, for one, am against the act to ban smoking.

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 1. v121 some people think visitors to other countries should imitate local custom and behaviors. Other people disagree that the host country should welcome culture diversity. To what extend do you agree?

Identifying the foreign customs is a difficult task for any visitors. Cultural conflicts may occur when one does not know much about the strange social codes other than his own country. In reality, people’s opinion about whether the host country should encourage cultural differences or to what degree should they accept the alien cultures as they may cause annoyance to them. In my opinion, I insist that the local customs should be highly respected in many occasions but not necessarily be followed blindly.

The primary concern is given to the significance of one’s national traditions and heritage that has been passed down. It is important because all these customs has undergone thousands of years of practice and become the treasure of a nation. For instance, the eating tradition in many areas and regions such as people eat red eggs when they have a new baby, eating jiaozi—a kind of Chinese dumpling when we celebrate Chinese lunar year, and still eating when someone’s grandpa passed away. This might be a blunt for many visitors who first come here. Visitors in such a situation may choose to practice as if he were a local or he may just see and enjoy the atmosphere.

Even if visitors keep a stance away from the traditions of a foreign country, they should not be hostile to them. The reason is simple. If the visitors refuse to take the fact that the local customs may offend their faith or something they believe, and even they are disheartening, they will possibly act improperly under such situation. Take eating out custom as example, Chinese people when eating out, there are always a person who masters the table and even pays the bill. This might be offensive to a foreign who does not get used to this manner. But as we Chinese people say” Ru Xiang Sui Su” literally means that one should get used to the local customs when visiting it, this is a reflection of what we discuss here about the culture diversity.

In general, one should see how he knows about the cultures and how he should react upon it. There are no fixed rules to be followed. What seems important is “when in Rome; do as the Romans do” philosophy applies to many situations when one feel uncertain about the host culture.
 

The issue that whether the government should spend billions of money in space research has become very hot. It has already turned to be the core topic in the fierce debate among people.

The proponents argued that the government ought to permit the huge amount of money in the budget spending in exploring the space. There are many reasons for this. The first but not least, the natural resources on the earth is decreasing, such as water, land, oil. These are all the essential material in human’s life and the modern industry. But with the expansion of population and the pollution, these resources are becoming less and less. Space research has given human a chance to move to another planet, such as Mars. Secondly, it also helps the scientists to discover new kinds of rare metals. At last, humans are always hoping to find another forms of life in the universe. As a result, people need the research of space no matter how much it costs.

The opponents, however, hold the opposite opinions about the space researches. They list several reasons against the investment in exploring space. First of all, the government’s budget is so tight that it causes a lot of shortage of money in many other fields besides space research, like education. And from their point of view, other sections like education have more contributions than exploiting space. Furthermore, space researches have lots of risks connecting to the cost of lives. The third reason against the spending on the space research is that in many cases, the researches have the results, which have nothing valuable. It is just a waste of money. And if the money was used in another way, it could have done a better improvement in people’s life.

In my opinions, space research really has many advantages and can improve people’s daily life. But I think it doesn’t deserve so much money and sacrifices of other sections in the society. The government has the obligations to spend the money in the fields such as education, health care, social insurances that can offer more improvements to make our life better.

苏毅：启德雅思学员。在五月二十九日雅思考试中获阅读满分，写作七分，听力七点五，口语六分，总分七点五分。

It is right that college graduates earn higher salaries than the less well-educated in the community. But they should also pay the full cost of their study. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some conclude that college students should bear Idontknowl expenses for their higher learning on the generalization that college graduates usually receive higher salaries for similar jobs than those without a college degree. We can not deny that higher level of education, indeed, do associate with better income. Still, build on such fact alone, the conclusion remains questionable when more aspects are taken into consideration.

The whole argument in question rests on an assumption that it is always the case that people with higher education make more money than those less well-educated. But salary or income is, in most cases, based on contributions made by employees to companies or organizations in which they are employed. Statistics in the labor market indicate that people with professional training tend to find jobs easier than college graduates do and that blue-collar workers who do not hold college degrees are becoming the hotties in the labor market. Employers prefer to hire and pay more to highly skilled and specially trained people rather than fresh college graduates. In the auto industry, for instance, skilled technicians make two or three times more than their college educated counterparts who make the average salaries in other companies. And it is widely accepted that people’s income is determined more by talent, hard work, and willingness to take risks than solely by certain qualifications such as college education. Otherwise, the unemployment rate of college graduates would not be increasing every year and the rule of supply and demand will lose much of power in controlling the labor market. Admittedly in some knowledge extensive field such as research, teaching, and practice of law the labor force are primarily consists of highly educated professionals. But such people make up only a fraction of the labor market and are thus unrepresentative of the whole employment in general.

Considering the goal of education, we find that it is even more problematic for the country to throw all the responsibility of financing college education to college students. The goal of higher education of a nation is to improve and strengthen the general level of intellectual and professional capacity of its labor force, thereby increasing the competency of the nation in the global economy. As tax payers, parents all contributes to the education system and country in various ways. It is only reasonable and necessary that the country gives some forms of financially assistance to students to ease the burden of rising education costs. Such help should go to not only students from needy or impoverished families but also outstanding students from affluent backgrounds. Doing so can significantly boost the motivation of children from millions of families to engage in higher level of study. It is understandable that the general quality of people in a country will improve and its economy will benefit both now and in years to follow.

If the burden of supporting children’s higher education is dumped on parents and students, thousands of brilliant students will be deprived of chances to pursue their academic inspiration. Among those who suffer would definitely be future great scientists, business managers, artists and statesmen. The loss will be disastrous and irreversible.

In conclusion, the idea that students should also pay the full cost of their study is wrong and harmful because it is wrong to assume that higher education necessarily equalize high income. Moreover, it is in the best interest of a nation to take responsibility in financing college education so that the goal of higher education will be better met.

Topic: The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you aggress or disagree?

Prompted by some incidents of television and film inspired crimes, the issue of whether the government should control the amount of violence in films and on television has been a contentious discussion. Views on the topic vary greatly.

Advocates claim that the practice of controlling the amount of violence in mass media is a brazen violation of the people’s basic right to know the truth of the world. For example, some films contain some violence, but they reflect the things happened around us. Rather than producing negative effects on audience, to some extent, these films educate them. Furthermore, violence in films or on television programs cultivates people’s senses of crisis and responsibility, which makes ordinary people and police work better for public security. Consequently, it is irresponsible and foolish to blame the media for violence in our society.

However, opponents argue that violence in films and on television is detrimental to audience’s psychology. Taking fantasy for reality, people become aggressive and eccentric. They believe things can be solved by violence. In addition, violence has negative impacts on the stability of society. Research findings reveal that 60 percent of crimes are committed by teenagers after watching films or television which had a large amount of violence. Teenagers are so vulnerable and immature that they cannot judge whether the activities performed in mass media are right or not. As an illustration, a boy killed his younger sister in Australia because he imitated the violent scenes from television programs.

In my opinion, the disadvantages of controlling the amount of violence in media outweigh the advantages. But I believe the government should label how much violence the programs contain on the screens, and parents and teachers have responsibility to guide their children and help them to distinguish right from wrong when they watch violent programs.

Some people believe that greed and selfishness has become the basis of modern society, and we should return to the old traditions of family and community then we will have a better life. To what extent do u agree or disagree with the above opinion?

这道题的难点在于对the old traditions of family and community 的认识。在中国有一种四代同堂的tradition----人很多，对长者必须绝对地respect or even obey.家有“家规”，管教特多，最长者(male)最有威信，不是凭能力来定地位，而是由年龄来决定。多大程度上同意或不同意这种题应该说是比较灵活的，下面为其中的一种写作思路给大家参考：

赞成traditions of family and community对付greed n selfishness有招，因为四代同堂，老大掌门，互助友爱，共产同乐，无“私”可捞，无利可贪。

However,“旧社会”不能给我们带来更好的生活。我想举个例来说明。在我山区老家，到如今还有个传统(在考试中就说是old tradition就行了)：妇女不能与男人同桌而食，只能吃leftovers. s e x ual discrimination（性别歧视） 绝对传统。

In many parts of the world, a traditional concept of family called four generations living together has been handed down for thousands of years. In old times, the eldest man usually dominated others without any challenge amid the overpopulated home. In comparison with modern society, such a place should be an effective habitat to keep greed and selfishness ,which is considered as born nature of humans, away as a consequence of helping each other and sharing property between family members under the supervision of the most influential man.

However, over a thousand-year period those female members suffered extremely tough circumstances of s e x ual discrimination: they were in charge of childcare, household chores, farming--topsoil clearing and planting, you name it. What’s worse, they weren’t allowed to dine with men at the same table---leftovers filled up their bellies. Conversely, in contemporary society, a growing number of females are fighting for more human rights, say, equality to males, and they are gaining ground! How to convince the "fierce female tigers" these traditions are their better destiny? No way!!!

A better life can never be expected by only eliminating greed and selfishness; whereas it ought to be defined along with the following qualities: privacy respected, individual development, no s e x ual discrimination and a fair community with equal opportunities. In addition to my viewpoint, an appropriate way of education would probably a sensible solution to minimize the goddamn greed and selfishness in modern society instead of returning to the old society.

----广州仲恺雅思培训中心赖劲松

Discuss the difference between fast food and traditional food, such as nutrition, and recipe?

Living in a fast-paced society, the modern eaters are not longer interested in the contents of their food, but focused on whether a convenient meal is available at hand to devour. Statistics indicate that even housewives spend much shorter time at kitchen than their predecessors. This writing will compare and contrast advantages and disadvantages of fast food and traditional food.

Traditional food has its unshakable position in the human culture both in the social and historical context. Historically, chefs have gone to all lengths to experiment on novelties, invent cooking skills to gratify guests' hunger. Hence, traditional food has secured its incomparable value with a complex of tantalising features, including the variance, flavour, and taste. Its unique charms can nurture social relations as well. A family is accustomed to prepare a traditional feast to serve their guests at weekend or on holiday, such as Christmas.

Further, traditional food is favourably nutritious and balanced, compared with fast food. Dieticians have suggested audience through millions of televised courses that traditional food can retain more nutrition before being served on the table, for in general, they are cooked with a temperate heat. By contrast, the fast food are made at such a high temperature that nutrition has inescapably vaporised during the cooking process. Meanwhile, cooks pay more attention to the balance of recipe when preparing traditional food, such as combing meat with vegetable.

Despite a range of advantages, traditional food is overshadowed by its fast competitor in terms of time. Traditional food can consume a considerable amount of time from choosing materials, to arranging your table for visual appeal. In contrast, fast food cannot be faster when making a five-minute trip to a store around the corner, or even dialling to a fast food company. Needless to say recently, a string of fast food companies have tried their hardest to enrich the menu.

To summarise, traditional food has an irreplaceable role in our life, backed with various merits. However, its prevalence is declining for people are more and more time conscious.

Overshadow=eclipse=obscure:使黯然失色 His performance has eclipsed his predecessor's success.
Go to all lengths:竭尽全力地做某件事情
By comparison=in contrast=by contrast: 对比来说,
Compared with A=in contrast to A :和A对比来说,
On the contrary=conversely: 相反

some people think educate children of different abilities together will benefit them. others think intelligent children should be taught separately and give special courses, discuss both side and give own opinion!

Endowed by different talents, every individual is contributing to our society in different ways. Therefore, to treat every student equally is a common practice at existent schools; however, there is a tendency of growing popularity that schools are oriented by producing "elite students". It has aroused fierce controversies, for which reason I suggest that schools should keep their traditional strategy unchanged.

To begin with, to separate students according to their individual competence can injure their personality development. Some seemingly intelligent students are instilled with a sense of superiority. Consequently, they place themselves over the rest of the class, but some findings have indicated that those are of great wise are not necessarily of great use.

Secondly, to categorise students with a rigid rule can spur the rivalry between students, which is harmful for the academic atmosphere of a school. Schools are prestigious because of their inborn ability to provide children a relaxing and cooperative environment to study. To treat gifted children different would inescapably upgrade the competition between children. Arguments or infightings thus escalate.

Admittedly, to devise particular courses for a certain group of students can find their way to benefit students' future. Some students have advanced their special interests in some subjects, such as philosophy, astronomy, and geography, to mention but a few. Those subjects, in general, demand fewer practitioners, compared with other profitable subjects, e.g., business, computer, and graphic design, etc. However, as emphasised before, it is rational to leave students options to choose, instead of forcing an inflexible rule

In brief, to train students for specific purpose might be beneficial in some sense, but to coach them together is more favourable a strategy.

Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

Historic buildings present the history, culture as well as citizens` lives of a city for generations. They are also good places attracting tourists all over the world. Further more, they play important roles in public spirit. Therefore, I think that a city should preserve its historic buildings.

First, historic buildings are useful for studies. For each period of time, there are its typical architectures. Historic buildings reflect those architectures and materials that our predecessors used in construction. By studying them, researchers could get understanding about the evolution of not only construction but also society and culture. History as well as society develops continuously, the later generation bases on and inherits from the former and so on. Hence, understanding about the progress of evolution helps us to know better about humanity. This knowledge can be helpful to improve our lives now and our children`s later.

Additionally, historic buildings bring advantages of tourism. In deed, when visiting a place, tourists are always attracted by historic places such as museums, palaces, or buildings. They are fascinated in something different from their home country or different from daily modern life. By maintaining and preserving historic buildings, governments can attract many tourists to visit their city. Consequently, they can get much benefit from tourism. For example, in China, tourism brings in billions dollar benefit annually, and the government also invests a lot of money in developing tourism, especially in maintaining and caring for historic places. For many countries, tourism becomes the sharpest profession.

The last but not the least, historic buildings are spiritual places. People often go to historic places for ceremony or celebration. They come these places to thank for what their ancestors did for them, and wish good things for them and their children. Nevertheless, people are usually proud of their well-known historic place. For instance, French are so proud of their Eiffel tower, Egypt is famous for its pyramid.

In conclusion, historic buildings are invaluable proofs for social and human development studies. They reflect the evolution of history, culture of an area. They are places of public spirit and bring people pride of their city. Furthermore, they are good places to attract tourists and develop tourism. Hence, it is a very good idea that a city should maintain and preserve its historic buildings.

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